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"You fight with mercy... a dangerous advantage in the hands of your enemies. Do not let that happen, Bianca Contra."
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Pfffft preview of some chapter six scene. Why is Bianca so shocked? Why is Elliot injured and dirty? Why is Bianca's hair in a ponytail?!?! Find out in chapter six of Taboo~

Edit: I made a little process thing. :I

Bianca Contra (c) *Sanjo-Chan
Mareep (c) Game Freak
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Um. Just thought I'd give this a shot, since I've never written a critique before. You're my guinea pig, Linkie! <3 Hope you don't mind!

'Kay so, as always, your coloring and shading are beautiful. I envy you SO much for your skills. The wrinkles on the pants are looking good too!

The main thing I think you need to work on, however, is anatomy. Now, maybe this is just your style, but your human torsos are always thinner than the heads, which is an anatomy no-no. :'D Again, I don't know if this is intentional on your part, and while it looks fine in your style, I'd love to see your anatomy improve even more.

That, and I believe Mareeps are supposed to be larger, but I'm no Mareep expert, so I'll leave you to decide Elliot's size. But his tail looks a bit large (in proportion to his body) to me...?

Overall, though, the colors are very nice and pleasing to the eyes, and your characters are quite original, which is why you get 4.5 stars on both Vision and Originality. <3 However, the anatomy thing leaves me giving you 4 stars for Technique, and since this is just a stand-alone picture without a background or anything, the Impact only gets four stars as well.

All in all, a nice little pic that's definitely going in my faves -- and leaving me hanging for Chapter 6 of Taboo. Good job, Linkie!